Where I need to improve.
The main image is out of focus and weak. The picture needs to be bolder to match the rest of the magazine.
The blue text needs to bolder and move over to the left hand side and be smaller.
secondary photo needs to move down.
All sell lines and anchorage is too long. They need to be punchier. (in the studio)
Footer is way too big.
Bar code is too big.
New main image is needed.
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